Tuesday, June 24, 2008

an hour well spent, with nothing to show

i wish you could read my heart. you'd learn so much about me. you would know me and love me. instead i have this page for you to read. and so you go away empty. because i don't know how to transcribe my heart onto this page.

6 comments:

flowgun said...

That's good though. When you "transcribe [your] heart" its often a bit overwhelming for the people listening and obviously even you at this point. Start by transcribing small things. Your finger or...other things...and then progress from there. It'll ease both you and your readers into things.

For example: Have you seen the previews to Journey to the Center of the Earth? They butcher the hell out of it for the sake of appealing to a broader audience. It makes me gag.

Adam said...

I don't think anyone leaves here empty. So your blog is a little sparse, like flowgun says, start small and work your way into the things you want to talk about.

I didn't start by ranting and raving over letters to the editor. I grew into it. =P

carly said...

"Words are beautiful but restricted. They're very masculine, with a compact frame."
-Jeff Buckley

flowgun said...

Hi, my name is Michael and I blog once a menstrual cycle and wonder why people don't comment on my page.

edluv said...

sick burn!

Demirep said...

Oh Mike Wise. Your soft underbelly is exposed.